“Letter Composed During a Lull in the Fighting” Kevin Powers
What I first noticed about this poem is the way the soldier describes how he loves the recipient of his letter, “I tell her I love her like not killing or ten minutes of sleep...” (1-2). He is in the middle of a war, exhausted and lonely. When he says “I love you”, it carries a great weight.
“War is just us making little pieces of metal pass through each other” (10-12). These last lines are so profound, yet so simply put. I was struck by the matter-of-fact and detached way in which Pvt. Bartle describes the killing going on around them, and by them. I felt that the soldier writing the letter seemed to be trying to maintain meaning in the words he was writing amongst all the seemingly pointless killing.
“Woman Hanging On to the 13th Floor Window” Joy Harjo
This poem resonated with me the most. The words are so rich and tender. This intense struggle that the woman is going through is meant to mirror that of everyone’s struggle in life. This poem shows the pain in trying to life a full life while not really knowing what that means. There is a loneliness in this poem, but also a shared connection of struggle. The ending lines of the poem were the most powerful to me-
The woman hangs from the 13th floor window crying for
the lost beauty of her own life. She sees the
sun falling west over the grey plane of Chicago.
She thinks she remembers listening to her own life
break loose, as she falls from the 13th floor
window on the east side of Chicago, or as she
climbs back up to claim herself again (60-66).
I believe that the woman wants to claim herself and live, she just does not know where to begin.
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Powers, Kevin, "Letter Composed During a Lull in the Fighting." poetryfoundation.org
Harjo, Joy, "Woman Hanging From the 13th Floor Window." poetryfoundation.org
I also picked the poem “Letter Composed During a Lull in the Fighting” Kevin Powers, because it also stuck an emotion with me. I love the statement you make, “I felt that the soldier writing the letter seemed to be trying to maintain meaning in the words he was writing amongst all the seemingly pointless killing.” I image men and women who are in the combat areas try very hard to forget where they are. But instead they get lost in other things besides the killings. I believe that might be a reason why their letters home seem so profound.
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